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Black Belt (Free verse) by etherealmaiden

Homework to do Grades to get I must be perfect Tighten the Belt Roommate troubles Feeling left out I must try harder Tighten the Belt Room is a mess Parents are mad I must clean up Tighten the Belt Friends are gone Relationships lost I must find a way Tighten the Belt Couples all around Love in the air I must get a man Tighten the Belt Eating less food Reflection looks worse I must lose weight Tighten the Belt Everything's wrong Never good enough I must get it right Failing to breathe Spiraling thoughts I am in heaven One more notch

hypatia 3-May-04/10:34 AM
Allow me to talk to you about Dark Angel. Anything you write which he finds clever, smart, true, inspiring, etc., he does not respond to. He waits for your oversight, slip, or weak statement in an area where he knows more, and then he pounces. He has a hundred words for feces and sprinkles them freely in place of your poem, your comment, your idea, your knowledge, or your name. If you show him up or teach him something, he simply ignores you. If he finds error, he attacks the error while ignoring the substance of your statement. He is the Western outlaw before Law. He lives by ruthlessness and therefore wins. Dark Angel will always win because he shoots in the back, kills the easy prey, and there is no law against it. You can ignore him or fight him. Both methods fail in a lawless society like Poemranker. I hope this helps.




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