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zodiac 14-Jul-05/4:18 AM
You fucking pissy-ass whiny crybaby fuck. Why don't you do the world a favor and take a long leap into a nearby wall? What the fuck did you expect posting your poetry on a site called fucking POEMRANKER DOT FUCKING COM, you goddamn illiterate weeping fuckrag? And now bitching on about how you don't think you're entitled to criticise other people's poetry because it's the true deep expression of their true deep feelings? Get a fucking life, you fucking preteen prat. What makes you think then that people are going to feel entitled to RANK YOUR FUCKING ALL-CAPS BULLSHIT WHINY-ASS SO-CALLED POEMS? Oh, yeah, because the site's called POEMRANKER DOT COM, and the people who came here would kinda naturally be people who liked criticising other people's poetry. And because you're such a fucking genius we cum just thinking about you. Get a clue. This is a site made for RANKING and CRITICISING poems. What did you think we'd be doing? It's kind of like if you went to a FUCKING RESTAURANT everybody would be EATING, dontcha think, you gummy cumrag?

And isn't it much more likely that you're just too fucking lazy and stuck up your own distended ass to bother reading other people's poems? Yeah, um, that would make you pretty much like the million other self-obsessed preteens who've been here before you. You certainly don't have a problem criticising other people's criticisms of you.

And get a fucking clue. Nobody here is as nasty as you. Nobody here has called anybody a thicktwat except you. And now me. You're a fucking labia-deficient thicktwat. Dovina, wilco, and the rest tried to tell you nicely, now I'll tell you in your own fucking deficient language:

YOU, ASSCAP, ARE THE WRONG ONE.

YOU ARE THE RUDE ONE.

YOU ARE THE ONE WHO SOUNDS LIKE A WHINY 12-YEAR-OLD BITCH.

YOU ARE THE INCONSIDERATE ONE AND THE FUCKING CONCEITED ONE.

YOU NEED TO GO AWAY NOW.

PS-Saying "you are boring me" is the same thing as saying "I can't read more than a sentence without hurting my poor juvenile pea-brain."

PPS-You can't write, you fucking illiterate. You make American education look good.

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