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Goin' For Broke (Other) by MacFrantic
Overheard in the dead of night: "Watch your feet" "I've lost my way" "To your left" "O...Ok..." "I've found the door, give me the key" "Are they awake?" "...?" "My family!" "I don't hear nothin'" "Quick, let's go" "Shh..." "Wha...?" "Shh..." "But we..." "..." "Oh no..." "Grrr..." "Go!" "Shoo!" "What do we do?" "I'm gonna try it. How 'bout you?" "Grrr.." "He's pissed!" "Who gives a shit" "I just thought..." "Good dog...now...sit!" "How'd you know that he'd obey" "Just move your ass, you're in the way" "We're almost there, remove the pin" "I can't" "It's stuck... Clank!" "We're in!" "The stairs are creaky watch your step" "Creeeak..." "Fuck...!" "God, you're so inept!" "I hope she's sleeping" "Shhhh!" "Who's there?" "..." "..." "..." "Hello?" "Anybody?" "..." "Hmm... had me scared" "That was close!" "No help from you" "I'm sorry dude" "Now...what to do" "Say that you had to help me out" "That won't work...!" "Well, no need to pout" "You know you're lucky I won't tell" "Yeah...like you would" "Just watch, I'll yell" "I'm sorry...look" "The coast is clear!" "Are you alright?" "Me?...No fear" "See you tomorrow" "Before the bell?' "Yeah...I guess" "Michael Smith!" "Oh hell!"

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