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It Grows Dark Again (Other) by mindsigns
A fine attack can bring the enemy to war jumpstart the victory from shore Lovers bleed as the politician runs succumb to every smoking gun A second wind, the loss begins to take a toll Oh, boy, let's go and watch the armies grow For forty nights and forty days, the generals play Where is the twenty-fifth brigade? The burning fields and unmarked graves shall snag a few and half the class of '42 I saw your brother looking down into the mud I've seen your future father's blood "Hey, I'm drowning much to my honor I miss my baby She loves her bottle I am in trouble"

Up the ladder: Aimless
Down the ladder: A Taste of Rose

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5673
Posted: March 14, 2004 8:57 AM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2004 8:57 AM PST
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