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Gas Attack (Free verse) by christian
The stage was set
He was on the couch
With just his nose exposed
Watch this; He said to her
As he cautiously backed up
Exposing buttox
Silent tention
Ever so slowly
Backing up
Slowly slowly slowly
Drawing bare buttox
Towards sleeping nose
The time was now
No longer could it be held
The sound pierced the silence
It was louder then expected
A puff ruffled the hair
The essence of nasty
Holding in laughter
Their sides quakeing
They observed the outcome
The nose awoke slowly
Face scrunched
The discust of realization
Was it the smell?
Was it the sound?
What awoke you?
The smell you asshole
I'll get you back
Said the face behind the nose
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Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3985
Posted: February 20, 2004 1:57 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2004 1:57 PM PST
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