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Free verse № 9021

Wish to Be

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Aug 2002 · 0 comments

It's a house that fades into summer, watching the twilight from the window. That melts into sweet memories, rising to the stars.Something so beautiful, yet it's all that you are. On a wave, passing by, the moon glints on your face. It's shadow dances in the sand, travelling through your eyes. So deep I can see your soul. So soft and white the clouds tumble by, and send the rainbows flying into our own ideas of how we wish to be.

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