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Wish to Be (Free verse) by Butterflies
It's a house that fades into summer, watching the twilight from the window. That melts into sweet memories, rising to the stars.Something so beautiful, yet it's all that you are. On a wave, passing by, the moon glints on your face. It's shadow dances in the sand, travelling through your eyes. So deep I can see your soul. So soft and white the clouds tumble by, and send the rainbows flying into our own ideas of how we wish to be.

Up the ladder: Masked
Down the ladder: the song of snow

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9018
Posted: August 15, 2002 12:31 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 12:31 AM PDT
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