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Jade Teacup (Free verse) by heartlessempath
Spotted Innocence,
Youâre no longer white,
But instead a dingy grey
That shouldnât be,
Your only sin a desire to be more,
And when you left you were
Sweet saccharine,
All china patterns and window hangings,
Here you are now,
Where is here?
Here is the hell,
The mundane hell of
Mediocrity you canât escape,
Because no one can.
Thereâs no new move to make,
And now youâre oriental,
A teacup made of jade,
Delicate and brittle with
No way out of the cupboard.
Youâre decorative, and
I love you,
My antiquity, my showpiece.
Youâll hate me someday,
Just as you hate what Iâve done to you-
Children and minivans and a dream come true.
Nightmarish to think this is what we wanted.
Not thinking for ourselves,
But as a pair, not whole ourselves,
Always having to consider the other
In everything.
And youâll miss being free and lonely,
Instead of chained and lonely
Like you are now-
All alone in a crumbling ivory tower.
Rapunzel, rapunzel,
Let down your ashen locks,
My grey princess,
My paragon of
Perfected stained innocence.
I love you though.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9260
Posted: February 16, 2004 11:11 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2004 11:11 AM PST
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