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The Couch (Other) by BrandonW
My feet sink in the cushions
I bathe my knees in tears
Throw-pillows clutter, memories
Of making love right here
All thoughts are interrupted
The television steers
Images in my direction
The storm at mind not clear
A box filled with your pictures,
Your notes and all our things
Spilled over on my floor, transmitting
Like a chandaleir
A torrent of emotion
Your eyes they start to blur
Like the couch on which I sit
Despondant and azure
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6582
Posted: February 15, 2004 4:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 15, 2004 4:17 PM PST
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