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The Couch (Other) by BrandonW
My feet sink in the cushions I bathe my knees in tears Throw-pillows clutter, memories Of making love right here All thoughts are interrupted The television steers Images in my direction The storm at mind not clear A box filled with your pictures, Your notes and all our things Spilled over on my floor, transmitting Like a chandaleir A torrent of emotion Your eyes they start to blur Like the couch on which I sit Despondant and azure

Up the ladder: A Pen Named Ed
Down the ladder: Gilded Lily

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6576
Posted: February 15, 2004 4:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 15, 2004 4:17 PM PST
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[7] deleted user @ 67.165.254.252 | 15-Feb-04/11:30 PM | Reply
Beautiful.
[n/a] BrandonW @ 172.175.65.61 > deleted user | 16-Feb-04/3:27 PM | Reply
Thank you much..
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