poemranker ::Astonding Metaphor for the End of Time (Bird) by brazen

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Astonding Metaphor for the End of Time (Bird)

by brazen

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Aug 2002 · Edited 28 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Flap flap, Up, Up, Left, Spiral Down, Right, Right, Straight, Left, Left, Left, Shit, Right, Right, Straight, Slow down, Flap, Perch.

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[10] -=SeTTle=- 28-Oct-02/8:08 AM Reply
fuck, you, fucking dipshit dicklicker. 10.
[n/a] brazen › -=SeTTle=- 28-Oct-02/2:10 PM Reply
you should've seen what that bird shit on...PS> don't get stoned at the park if you have a notebook...