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Astonding Metaphor for the End of Time (Bird) (Free verse) by brazen Flap flap,
Up,
Up,
Left,
Spiral Down,
Right,
Right,
Straight,
Left,
Left,
Left,
Shit,
Right,
Right,
Straight,
Slow down,
Flap,
Perch.
Up the ladder:
As I the Heart of a Fly
Down the ladder:
Holy Union (a two speaker poem)
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Posted: August 13, 2002 11:10 AM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2002 6:31 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10500 Comments:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.45
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28-Oct-02/8:08 AM
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fuck, you, fucking dipshit dicklicker. 10.
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brazen @ 12.90.40.79
> -=SeTTle=-
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28-Oct-02/2:10 PM
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you should've seen what that bird shit on...PS> don't get stoned at the park if you have a notebook...
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