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Astonding Metaphor for the End of Time (Bird) (Free verse) by brazen
Flap flap, Up, Up, Left, Spiral Down, Right, Right, Straight, Left, Left, Left, Shit, Right, Right, Straight, Slow down, Flap, Perch.

Up the ladder: As I the Heart of a Fly

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10494
Posted: August 13, 2002 11:10 AM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2002 6:31 AM PST
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[10] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.45 | 28-Oct-02/8:08 AM | Reply
fuck, you, fucking dipshit dicklicker. 10.
[n/a] brazen @ 12.90.40.79 > -=SeTTle=- | 28-Oct-02/2:10 PM | Reply
you should've seen what that bird shit on...PS> don't get stoned at the park if you have a notebook...
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