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Decide (Free verse) by hatedestruction
two paths lie before me
both have beautiful scenery
but difference you can see
both sting just like a bee
I don't know which one to take
they both are what I want
I have to choose with no mistake
both of them begin to taunt
flowing choices pass in front
I can't place within myself
the pain will come very blunt
can't disrupt the other's health
choosing my decision's wisely
not knowing what the outcome
must do the problem precisely
to ever retrieve my true love
in between the fork of trail
I fall down to my knees
I notice that I fail
to find the cure for the disease
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4363
Posted: January 8, 2004 8:25 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2004 8:25 AM PST
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