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Hopeless shelter (Free verse) by little_big_nose
I belong in a hopeless shelter Leave me there from now untill never Buried underneath five feet of lost legends For you, my soul beckons Lock me up, throw me down, spit me out, drag me to the curb It's no more than I deserve Now I can feel the best pain Being struck with your sweet as candy cane I'm the parental advisory Don't listen to what I say, you're not ready So what if I'm incognito My muscle can't add up to the size of your ego I can only see you through a black light Before you take your flight For me, it's only death For you, it's all the rest I know you don't want me I'm poor, hated and ugly Who cares if i faked it Jesus died naked

Up the ladder: His Secret in the Woods
Down the ladder: To all the assholes..

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7992
Posted: January 4, 2004 5:59 PM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2004 5:59 PM PST
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[5] nentwined @ 68.232.253.181 | 24-May-05/6:55 PM | Reply
pimple, though could work as cheap death metal lyrics, perhaps. Has a nice, swift flow.
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