Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

You (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
When you cup my face within the strength of your hands the perfection of it all is inevitable. Your delicate fingers caress, and undress everything that I despise the most. My senses are rendered naked, and contentedly helpless. You unveil my thoughts my hopes and my dreams with your unfocused desires and outspoken words. Each time you touch your soft lips to mine you steal all of my heartaches and insecurities and tuck them away neatly as if you had planned this all along. You???ve become my wall creating, invading, all of my personal space You hold me up and you tear me down creating this; a new me a better me. Within your hands you hold all my beauty and hide all my crimes Within your eyes you speak to me in a language only I can understand We are one mind of the same kind. Together we will become everything that we have ever wanted to be. Together we will make each other perfect.

Up the ladder: Love
Down the ladder: Something Strong

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 01
.. 10
.. 01
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 10984
Posted: August 7, 2002 11:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:36 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[8] Owner of the Sky @ 202.72.66.162 | 15-Aug-02/11:02 AM | Reply
I am so very happy for you. :D It's about time. You've deserved someone like her for a long time.. and oh yeah. Beautiful poem, as I know it is written from the heart. *hugs*
163 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001