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Aimless (Free verse) by jasondingus
My soul is like the tide, And my heart like the ocean, The basis and foundation, For all my devotion, What's inside me, You can see, Like a ship wandering aimlessly, Upon the ocean, The tide must roll, Like emotions out of control, The tide comes in, The tide goes out, Like my spirit, Its cast about, Like a ship all alone, Needs the tide to carry on, Like my heart, Full of emotion, So are the waves upon the ocean!

Down the ladder: It Grows Dark Again

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5672
Posted: December 28, 2003 4:14 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2003 4:14 PM PST
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[10] singinkygal @ 216.24.104.162 | 9-Jan-04/7:18 PM | Reply
So poetic
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