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For Lauren (Free verse) by BiggRobb
Ultimate understanding, the opaque has become clear
The clouds are parting sides
The sun shining through
Trying to express regret for making raw opinions
The ingredients combined
Process never started
Problems haunting everyone, bringing some to tear
What to do with life?
Unidentified meaning
Information is my superior and I, its minion
Thoughts form from others
Chain reaction of observance
Living on one side means knowing only one side
Two sides to everything
One side insufficient
Your house is made of glass, transparently silent
Hard not to look in
Deriving own judgment
My actions were wrong, I can no longer hide
Must set things straight
Nothing can linger
Regret is what I express, knowing it is meant
Here for you always
Waiting as a friend
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10254
Posted: December 15, 2003 11:00 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2003 11:00 PM PST
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