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First Snow (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
The gentle army returns.
Veterans, each one,
parading Maine St.
halting to gather about
a patch of fallen leaves here,
a wooden fencepost there.
Childrenâs faces flush with excitement,
foreheads covered by flat, dampened hair.
They attempt to capture the unpredictable chunks;
candy thrown from the celebratory firetruck.
The parade gathers past the bridge
between Maine and Main
where a dingy spray leaps off the river
as water pushes over the dam;
fervor renewed.
Homecoming,
six long months since
your last show in April,
Iâd nearly forgotten you
even to prepare for your welcome,
unsure that youâd ever return
from the arctic trenches
to liberate us from the tourists.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.571429
Weighted score: 5.422622
Overall Rank: 3049
Posted: October 23, 2003 7:47 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2003 7:47 PM PDT
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And we of California will be left with our eternal comfort - deprived of the joy of difference.
Maybe after not too long you'll wish you could cart it all out here for all of us to enjoy (until it melts)?