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Silent Tears (Free verse) by Artemis745
Silent tears fall at night, as she curls up in bed never wanting to face the morning light. She doesn't care to be alive cause of the pain from the man she onced loved destroyed her on the inside. He abused her mentally and emotionally tearing her down. All she wants to do now is just give up and die instead of living through this miserable life. Alone was she, facing her painful memories, she endured for so long, she forgot the person she was. The silent tears she cries no one sees no one hears and no one knows what she feels. In her pain and misery, she yearns so much for a loving touch, a gentle hug, one who would be good to her and never treat her bad. How long will these silent tears fall which drown her soul, when will she ever be whole again. Only heaven really knows. For now the silent tears must fall as the hope in her heart grows stronger for she knows one day she will find a love that will never do her wrong.

Up the ladder: To Paint Acceptance
Down the ladder: Bridesmaids in the Rain

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2765
Posted: October 10, 2003 6:01 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 6:01 PM PDT
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[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 11-Oct-03/5:34 AM | Reply
I think this would be particularly good as a character outline - I feel a story coming on.
[n/a] tadpole @ 24.55.116.69 | 11-Oct-03/4:35 PM | Reply
I know one
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