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Ostentations (Free verse) by airmankeg
This existence:
Shame and defeat everlasting:
Endless ostentations of repetitious failure
Doom and gloom, haunting despair
Tortures what is left of a pestilence-ridden soul
Pools of seething hate boil and spatter
All who offer the healing hand
Meadows of empty promises marred with scar tissue
Produced from the circumstances I have induced
Lies and slander rain from the sky
But offers no life to the twisted limbs of battered trees
That look up at the black clouds of deception
No water in sight to replenish my body or
Show me a sickening image
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 5.327808
Overall Rank: 3495
Posted: October 5, 2003 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2003 8:58 PM PDT
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