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Free verse № 67267

nightmare

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Sep 2003 · 1 comment

if you are lost on your way wandering in a mental purgatory don't be doubtful and stray cling to your loathesome body now you're too close to the pain let all the rain drench you come back, run in vain you're confused and don't know what to do hear the chorus of screams taking you back to the past it's not as hard as it seems to seek me there, hold on to me fast now you are lost on your way enveloped in a cloudy nightmare so, I will hunt you again to find you before you tear

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[n/a] deleted user 22-Jun-04/5:26 AM Reply
nice, come check mine out =D