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New Sneakers in the Night (Free verse) by TheVoiceless On the darkened silver night,
toes they did creep.
Upon dampened shimmering grass,
in brilliant white sneakers.
Shuffling dew drops towards the moon.
Down again like shooting stars,
gravity enforced to the ground.
Till finally on cemented rock,
the pavement they had found.
Up the ladder:
Mother
Down the ladder:
Close to my Heart
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Posted: September 23, 2003 1:38 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 1:38 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12149 Comments:
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23-Sep-03/4:29 AM
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