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Exfoliation into the winter (Other) by Shmuel Yerushalmi
Translated from hebrew Author, of original hebrew – version: Shmuel Yerushalmi. Israel Exfoliation, Into the winter, Her flame breaking through Strong wind: leaflets And rain … Above the mountain, Its getting downpour. The leaves – landscape of the trees, Wrapped in yellow; The flowers cups, Falling into sleep. Strong wind, Go swiftly, like a swallow before the rain; Exfoliation, Her flame paddele, Into the winter, Like a icy frost. Into the snow , That falling somewhere, In a top mountain, Her flame rize up.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
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Overall Rank: 6392
Posted: September 17, 2003 10:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 10:35 PM PDT
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