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shit shine (Free verse) by suprembeaner
Allow me three chances,
To felch and put shit shine
on your face,
let put my chode upon your body,
Over beat your senses,
Show you how to eat out of
your own ass,
Thoughts of what I will do,
Listen; youâll have a deep throat
After Iâm done,
I trace of jiz your body,
pleasure by cum,
Things are goâin to get dirty.
Take a pillâ¦
A squirt of semen on my face,
I couldâve been louder.
Deep insideâ¦
Thoughts of insex; sin?
Rape, anal orgasms⦠shown in a hand shake.
(the motion made me spew)
Sweat dribbles from my penis,
To yours already covered,
Flip and slideâ¦
Doing a little 69,
My thumb rubbing your anal beardâ¦
My penis cant hold back
Holding back till the time is right,
This is happening all night.
I dedicate this to joeblow.
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Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12962
Posted: September 13, 2003 5:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 5:59 PM PDT
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is the grammar/spelling part of the poem's point, or just there?