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shit shine (Free verse) by suprembeaner
Allow me three chances, To felch and put shit shine on your face, let put my chode upon your body, Over beat your senses, Show you how to eat out of your own ass, Thoughts of what I will do, Listen; you’ll have a deep throat After I’m done, I trace of jiz your body, pleasure by cum, Things are go’in to get dirty. Take a pill… A squirt of semen on my face, I could’ve been louder. Deep inside… Thoughts of insex; sin? Rape, anal orgasms… shown in a hand shake. (the motion made me spew) Sweat dribbles from my penis, To yours already covered, Flip and slide… Doing a little 69, My thumb rubbing your anal beard… My penis cant hold back Holding back till the time is right, This is happening all night. I dedicate this to joeblow.

Up the ladder: Broken
Down the ladder: Lowest Common Currency

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8333333
Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12957
Posted: September 13, 2003 5:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 5:59 PM PDT
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[n/a] grendal @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Sep-03/6:27 PM | Reply
this is a true piece of shit.
[1] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > grendal | 14-Sep-03/7:24 PM | Reply
indeed.

is the grammar/spelling part of the poem's point, or just there?
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