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I'm Burning (Free verse) by Milla
The night is hot and my body is Trembling with heat Causing a red cloud of smoke And I am the only one who sees it I cannot explain the origin of My pain, the heat A relentless blush emerges I'm asleep and dream of perfect Moments where fantasy collides with reality And make my dreams a bit more colorful While my soul is slowly aching And confuses my logic I want to heal the pain that runs So deep in my veins that My heart is on fire I taste the fire with my tongue And realize that nothing, Nothing can melt this pain Swimming around in my veins I am hot and I am burning

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7884
Posted: September 10, 2003 6:31 AM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2003 6:31 AM PDT
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