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I'm Burning (Free verse) by Milla
The night is hot and my body is
Trembling with heat
Causing a red cloud of smoke
And I am the only one who sees it
I cannot explain the origin of
My pain, the heat
A relentless blush emerges
I'm asleep and dream of perfect
Moments where fantasy collides with reality
And make my dreams a bit more colorful
While my soul is slowly aching
And confuses my logic
I want to heal the pain that runs
So deep in my veins that
My heart is on fire
I taste the fire with my tongue
And realize that nothing,
Nothing can melt this pain
Swimming around in my veins
I am hot and I am burning
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7887
Posted: September 10, 2003 6:31 AM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2003 6:31 AM PDT
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