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going crazy (Free verse) by bluehearts12
sitting next to me, his head so close to mine, holding hand and touching arms, how I only long to kiss him. feel his lips, touch his face, feel his warm embrace, but i'm making myself go crazy, for this i cannot, because his mom is standing right behind us!!

Up the ladder: The world
Down the ladder: Dreaming in the Woods

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10444
Posted: July 26, 2002 12:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 26, 2002 12:42 PM PDT
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