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Tangled (Free verse) by mikeyh53581
Face beneath the pillow, tangled in the sheets
Time moves mysteriously past us
The days blissfully turned into weeks
And somehow the weeks became months
When you turn your face from me
And your legs no longer tangle my sheets
Will you still think fondly of me?
Will your beauty still brighten my street?
Face beneath the pillow, tangled in the sheets
I've awakened to emptiness and disbelief
The days will slowly turn into weeks
Will you ever again walk down my street?
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10784
Posted: July 25, 2002 2:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 26, 2002 1:54 PM PDT
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