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Something Caught My Eye (Free verse) by x311
It was a day like almost any other
Except for one huge thing
I met someone who could be everything
You may think she is only a girl
But she is so much more to me
A butterfly fluttering free through the air
Beauty like none that this world has ever seen
She melted my hardened heart with her angelic voice
Comfort, laughter, and cheer all flowed from her smile
A radiant smile, as bright as the sun on a cloudless day
Every waking moment I can only see her face
I fall asleep to thoughts of her whispering so softly
And my dreams are filled only with images of her
A body and face of a goddess she possesses
Her hair flowing like freshly spun silk, shimmering in the sun
And her skin glistened like liquid gold
Truly, she is one of God's finest creations
And to think, I met her on a day like any other
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Weighted score: 4.4172935
Overall Rank: 12952
Posted: July 25, 2002 1:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 1:44 PM PDT
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