poemranker ::The Return by doug_soderstrom

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Free verse № 58423

The Return

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Well I'm back! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Pause.] And I'm black! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Pause.] I've got class! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Pause.] Watch your ass! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Pause.] Please stay calm! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Pause.] So Der Strom! BUH DUR DUR! DUR BUH BUH! [Applause.]

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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 31-Jul-03/5:19 PM Reply
Doug, you'll have to excuse my friends, they're racists.
[4] nentwined 19-Apr-04/10:29 PM Reply
actually kinda cute. reminds me of strongbad.