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note to who? (Free verse) by Brian Tiensvold Hey baby! Miss me?...maybe?
This is just a note to,
No one i know...
...or maybe i do but don't know you now.
So much past has been forgotten, somehow.
Now i'm new,
and unnoticed by you,
who ever you are.
Speaking out loud in a crowd and ignored.
Up the ladder:
Some bad things
Down the ladder:
Introduction by Decree...
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Posted: June 25, 2003 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2003 11:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7035 108 view(s)
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