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Endless Karma (Free verse) by KagatoSan Life, a fragile thing,
One can do many,
like dance and sing,
But to me, I sing Rage!
Yet thou still dares,
Dare to interfere!
Thou art in Thy Land.
Like Cherries, so innocent,
You will die by my hand!
How deadly can the innocense be!?!
Up the ladder:
Mother's day on Venus
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Posted: June 25, 2003 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2003 6:29 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.85 Overall Rank: 1575 Comments:
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You sound like a fucking computer dork on a caffiene buzz going.
how deadly blee bloo blee look at me. Shut up.
Just shut the fuck up. Good god, I've never seen such idiotic chatter. This isn't even a poem, or a joke, It's nothing it's boring, it's stupid, and it says absolutely nada. Like a Mcdonalds shake that's been in the back of the car all summer, crap, crust, crud. Stolid to the max!