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Forever Together (Lyric) by hotwire
by Bily Foster I see you in my life forever I see that we will be together I'm committed to what I see I'm committed to you and me When we started we were really cute talked about band camp and about that flute You made me happy by being a friend which is why I'll be there until the end Even though things aren't on the best of terms maybe we could point fingers at the germs Because now you make me sick And now you think I'm just a dick But I still see you in my life forever I still see that we'll be together As I sit back in my life and watch You squirm to get by at any cost Especially when you sit And realized what you lost And when you try to command me again You haven't except the concept of friend Which is why I'll be there Until the end See your still entertaining to me With your crazy antics I always see You give me someone to make fun of As I sit back and watch from above I guess I could call you a muse Because you'll learn you'll always loose Having ideas is empty and hollow Since you don't seem to know how to follow Through with what you say you'll do Which is why I'm finally through So thanks for keeping me in the loop While I the took time to regroup I see you in my life forever I see that we will be together I'm committed to watching you try to get by I'm committed to watch you fail with every guy I'll watch you feel sorry for yourself As you keep yourself on that shelf Never truly committing to someone Like Russian roulette you hold the gun But your to scared to fire, to scared you'll expire You'll never experiencing because your a liar Since you won't commit, neither will anyone else And so you'll keep just to yourself I see you in my life forever I see that we will be together Through all the heart breaks you should finally see No one loved you more than me

Up the ladder: i blame me
Down the ladder: Globetrotter

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4448
Posted: June 17, 2003 8:03 AM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 8:03 AM PDT
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[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Sep-03/11:03 PM | Reply
what memories this brought to mind.. atoast to you hot.
The Third Isis
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