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Guide Me (Free verse) by x311
Running down one path
Stumbling on another
Flying so high
And crashing straight down
I live my life
Without direction
Where's the path you paved for me?
Visions of past transgressions
Cloud over my eyes
Scarred and broken
I keep wandering
My heart is numb
Broken too many times
Why can't you give me some direction?
Something missing
A piece of me lost
This dark, dreary world
Ripped it right out of me
I try to stand up
But get kicked back to the ground
Open my eyes to see the road you chose
Confusion all around me
My mind filled with indecision
I've tried so hard
For far too long
So close to giving up
But before I do I ask you
To be that light unto my path
And illuminate the way
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5714285
Weighted score: 4.615798
Overall Rank: 12441
Posted: July 18, 2002 10:53 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2002 10:53 AM PDT
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