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Out of the Blankness (Free verse) by feathers68
Everything wipped out, in the darkened street I sit. Blankness surrounds me! Everything is new and my mind swept clean. Who is it I am looking at? Who is it I am looking for? was there a yesterday? How did I get here?

Down the ladder: Dream Girl

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7876
Posted: June 3, 2003 1:46 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 1:46 PM PDT
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[9] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Sep-03/10:59 PM | Reply
I feel this,,everytime i hit my ATM>Thanx for putting it into words.

The Third Isis


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