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Dreary Mindsets (Free verse) by Christina The dreary mindsets
the crawling skin
deliverance set in
desolation, isolation.
Just one thing I request
to put escapism to the test
deliverance in a pipe
oblivion through a box
Lets burn the thoughts
alas, avoid untimely dues
But now where else may I know
I just want to escape this show.
Up the ladder:
Just those three little words
Down the ladder:
Holiday In Hell
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Posted: June 1, 2003 4:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2003 4:19 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10212 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23
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2-Jun-03/3:38 AM
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Great poeme! You eloquently express the mind-numbing boredom of a David "the new Houdini" Blaine show. How ironic that while he's absorbed in his self-important stunts, his audience also just wants to escape: to any place that doesn't include David Blaine.
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