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sprit of the night (Free verse) by crwncka1
as i was sleeping one night dreams of this and that nothing unusual there i tell of but what i tell of is that before i awakened for right before i awoke i had this most unusual type of experience this was not of the usual dream state this was something different i say for what i felt was something never felt before what i felt was of a different state for what i felt was something of wickedness i say i felt it entering me though the pineal gland region, crown of my skull as it went on though my skull down though my pituitary gland region down to the top base of my spine is when i first felt myself struggle to awake as i felt this presence i shall call it go further down my spine past my throat on down toward my heart from there, as i now felt it encompassing my body as it continued down toward my spleen it now feeling as i was being taken by this this presence from where i don't know in my despair, i tried to awaken myself for this evil shall not doom me! i reassured myself but in vain i tried as i could not come out of this sleep the seconds passing felt of hours as this strange erie presence kept filling me for now it was almost entirely captivating me as it for sure eventually would for just as it finally did for just as i finally awakened myself from this sleep is finally when i noticed it was of nothing evil for this presence i felt for this presence i'am now aware of was simply of my own simply my own sprit i felt, for now i'am aware

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6089
Posted: May 30, 2003 4:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 4:49 PM PDT
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