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sprit of the night (Free verse) by crwncka1
as i was sleeping one night
dreams of this and that
nothing unusual there i tell of
but what i tell of is that before i awakened
for right before i awoke
i had this most unusual type of experience
this was not of the usual dream state
this was something different i say
for what i felt was something never felt before
what i felt was of a different state
for what i felt was something of wickedness i say
i felt it entering me though the pineal gland region, crown of my skull
as it went on though my skull
down though my pituitary gland region
down to the top base of my spine
is when i first felt myself struggle to awake
as i felt this presence i shall call it
go further down my spine
past my throat
on down toward my heart
from there, as i now felt it encompassing my body
as it continued down toward my spleen
it now feeling as i was being taken by this
this presence from where i don't know
in my despair, i tried to awaken myself
for this evil shall not doom me!
i reassured myself
but in vain i tried
as i could not come out of this sleep
the seconds passing felt of hours
as this strange erie presence kept filling me
for now it was almost entirely captivating me
as it for sure eventually would
for just as it finally did
for just as i finally awakened myself from this sleep
is finally when i noticed it was of nothing evil
for this presence i felt
for this presence i'am now aware of
was simply of my own
simply my own sprit i felt, for now i'am aware
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6089
Posted: May 30, 2003 4:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2003 4:49 PM PDT
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