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Burning Bridge (Free verse) by Jake
I stand watching the burning bridge,
Seeing your shape though the flames.
I can not tell if you are looking or not.
I do not know why I started the fire,
but I know it was a mistake.
I can not take it back, it is to late.
I know that I will miss you,
As I walk away,
I hope things are better this way.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10210
Posted: May 24, 2003 10:36 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 10:36 PM PDT
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