poemranker ::Burning Bridge by Jake

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Burning Bridge

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2003 · 0 comments

I stand watching the burning bridge, Seeing your shape though the flames. I can not tell if you are looking or not. I do not know why I started the fire, but I know it was a mistake. I can not take it back, it is to late. I know that I will miss you, As I walk away, I hope things are better this way.

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