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Burning Bridge (Free verse) by Jake
I stand watching the burning bridge, Seeing your shape though the flames. I can not tell if you are looking or not. I do not know why I started the fire, but I know it was a mistake. I can not take it back, it is to late. I know that I will miss you, As I walk away, I hope things are better this way.

Up the ladder: Mother Defined

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10205
Posted: May 24, 2003 10:36 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 10:36 PM PDT
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