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Dreaming (Free verse) by thirdchildofpain
Free falling towards the ground I loose all sense of being. Staring at the black cement What does it have in store for me? Life’s too short to tell and I'm Not going to stand around Waiting.... To find out. Living your dreams Defying your nightmares, Isn’t life so GRAND? Close your eyes. Open your thoughts, See the possibilities Or The destruction You have caused. Awaken memories that have Hid In the back of your mind Trying to escape To remember The things that Can never be forgiven. P When you give U You’ll hit the ground. What a sad thought, For someone like Yourself It’s almost Unbearable. Please wake up.

Up the ladder: the man
Down the ladder: A thought

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12628
Posted: May 24, 2003 8:48 AM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 8:48 AM PDT
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