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Free verse № 50086

Dreaming

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2003 · 0 comments

Free falling towards the ground I loose all sense of being. Staring at the black cement What does it have in store for me? Life’s too short to tell and I'm Not going to stand around Waiting.... To find out. Living your dreams Defying your nightmares, Isn’t life so GRAND? Close your eyes. Open your thoughts, See the possibilities Or The destruction You have caused. Awaken memories that have Hid In the back of your mind Trying to escape To remember The things that Can never be forgiven. P When you give U You’ll hit the ground. What a sad thought, For someone like Yourself It’s almost Unbearable. Please wake up.

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