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Dreaming (Free verse) by thirdchildofpain
Free falling towards the ground
I loose all sense of being.
Staring at the black cement
What does it have in store for me?
Lifeâs too short to tell and
I'm
Not going to stand around
Waiting....
To find out.
Living your dreams
Defying your nightmares,
Isnât life so
GRAND?
Close your eyes.
Open your thoughts,
See the possibilities
Or
The destruction
You have caused.
Awaken memories that have
Hid
In the back of your mind
Trying to escape
To remember
The things that
Can never be forgiven.
P
When you give U
Youâll hit the ground.
What a sad thought,
For someone like
Yourself
Itâs almost
Unbearable.
Please wake up.
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Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12633
Posted: May 24, 2003 8:48 AM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 8:48 AM PDT
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