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Too Long (Free verse) by Luv2write
I cannot see your face and it's been far too long since I've heard your laugh and seen your smile. And I forget the color of your eyes and how your hair fell on your face. Yet vividly I see your heart the only thing that matters. Your heart is pure and kind and though I may forget your incredibly appearance I will never forget your heart, your soul.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11299
Posted: May 1, 2003 7:05 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2003 7:05 PM PDT
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[6] richa @ 195.92.67.66 | 2-May-03/10:56 AM | Reply
not quite enough creative bites here, but the use of contrast is good
[4] rockinindividual @ 24.136.137.164 | 3-May-03/7:43 AM | Reply
hmmm. its good. its kind of the same old same old though. if it was written with more poetical oomph it might gain a better vote from me. 4
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