Too Long

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 May 2003 · 2 comments

I cannot see your face and it's been far too long since I've heard your laugh and seen your smile. And I forget the color of your eyes and how your hair fell on your face. Yet vividly I see your heart the only thing that matters. Your heart is pure and kind and though I may forget your incredibly appearance I will never forget your heart, your soul.

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5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

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[6] richa 2-May-03/10:56 AM Reply

not quite enough creative bites here, but the use of contrast is good

[4] rockinindividual 3-May-03/7:43 AM Reply

hmmm. its good. its kind of the same old same old though. if it was written with more poetical oomph it might gain a better vote from me. 4