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Eye wanted Two (Free verse) by Patrice727
I limped down the shady corridor.
It wanted to stretch infinitely.
One plus two forever⦠who knew?
This time will kill this feeling, shrew
Checking down at my watch
Frozen in time itself
The lashes were slashing my eye
But I try to know what I wanted
And I donât want infinite, just two
Infinite is too much time to kill
Crawled into this mine of mine
In this inexplicable mind, self
The door closed on my fingertips
So did my heart on your day
Today, this way was closed off too soon
My brain didnât mind much of the detour
Heart may have cut the smooth flow shortly
Is it imperative to rush? No?
Dead meat rotting in the bread basket
The smell always is infectious
Wounds seem that way to me
Are those dandelions real?
Too many lions donât dance the way dandy lions do in the spring
Great dress it seems so long and curvy
Two mountains of steamed clams you say?
Survive the mountain and the clams will come from the sea
The blind man never likes the ocean
Or is it the sea?
Iâm not blind but I canât see anything
Dumb yes naïve no ugly some may say
No dumping, no drugging, 65 mph
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10205
Posted: April 23, 2003 12:38 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2003 12:38 PM PDT
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