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Not Titled (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
Outside my window The sound of crickets is cystal in the air and held by the stars suspended by twine and kept young by time. As the moon looks in and smiles at me My eyes close shut And my fingers are curved and warm. And shadows preserve my body as my soul is free to wander 'till the new day begins.

Up the ladder: My everything
Down the ladder: my so called life

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10638
Posted: April 20, 2003 9:28 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2003 9:28 PM PDT
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[6] princesszoe @ 203.2.128.124 | 20-Apr-03/11:43 PM | Reply
i like your your suspended with twine line
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