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Free verse № 47571

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Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

Outside my window The sound of crickets is cystal in the air and held by the stars suspended by twine and kept young by time. As the moon looks in and smiles at me My eyes close shut And my fingers are curved and warm. And shadows preserve my body as my soul is free to wander 'till the new day begins.

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[6] princesszoe 20-Apr-03/11:43 PM Reply
i like your your suspended with twine line