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Dreams (Free verse) by adrenalize
You’re light years away But still I can’t forget you Dreams Even if they’re just that Dreams Are what we live on After all this time Everywhere I go I’m waylaid Your memory Drags me back to those days You probably don’t even remember me And yet your memory still remains here The sands of time Today stand between us No matter How far apart we may be No matter Where you may be You are still in this heart of mine Dreams Even if they’re just that Dreams Are what we live on Heaven knows If our paths are to cross again But to hold on Is all I can promise This darkness must end And the dawn is near Dreams Even if they’re just that Dreams Are what we live on

Up the ladder: All Cause Of You
Down the ladder: Green on White

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11644
Posted: April 18, 2003 8:20 AM PDT; Last modified: April 18, 2003 8:20 AM PDT
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[7] Ranger @ 213.1.45.14 | 20-Apr-03/1:36 AM | Reply
Yes, I agree. Surely nitol is the answer?
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