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Jimmy (Free verse) by amb12203
Jimmy lives atop the checkerboard below green lights shaking drinks in a pink tuxedo. Benign smile Pushing poison to the general's daughter who lines up her olives making sure that she's had too much before she porns herself to the nearest would-be rockstar. Clinking ice, shake don't stir once in a while steals a dance from a tatooed beauty who drives a hundred miles to see him every Tuesday. Jimmy slides across the room steps only on white squares making sure they mop his mess the morning after. Wanting nothing but the love of a sueded guy who only came to drink.

Up the ladder: My Heart Has Trembled
Down the ladder: Butterflies

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.571429
Weighted score: 5.153681
Overall Rank: 5178
Posted: July 15, 2002 12:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 12:29 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 15-Jul-02/12:55 PM | Reply
If Jimmy moves only on white squares, he must be a bishop. But bishops are not allowed to be gay. I suggest you learn to distinguish between chess and reality.
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