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I've Lost you (Free verse) by JustLin
The days swept passed Thinking of nothing but the past The visions of you Stays vivid in my mind The moments we spend The memories we had Lives in my mind The happiness we created The sadness we cried Remains in my mind Words of death Appeared to my mind For you I've lost but you're always on my mind

Up the ladder: A Great Day For Baseball
Down the ladder: Sorry for all the things

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10521
Posted: March 31, 2003 3:46 AM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 3:46 AM PST
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[6] deleted user @ 205.188.209.107 | 31-Mar-03/3:01 PM | Reply
dame, u need to stop writin this stuff and go fuck this person
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