poemranker ::I've Lost you by JustLin

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I've Lost you

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

The days swept passed Thinking of nothing but the past The visions of you Stays vivid in my mind The moments we spend The memories we had Lives in my mind The happiness we created The sadness we cried Remains in my mind Words of death Appeared to my mind For you I've lost but you're always on my mind

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[6] deleted user 31-Mar-03/3:01 PM Reply
dame, u need to stop writin this stuff and go fuck this person