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The Greatest Joy (Free verse) by trina_marie_73
You put me down, In every way, And apart of me dies, What can i say? To make you happy and proud, Is what i dream of, Every single night and day, You never appreciate my work, Somethings always wrong, Why must you hurt me, With hate so strong? Why are you never satisfied, With the things i do for you? The Greatest Joy In Life Would be you loving me too

Up the ladder: lost
Down the ladder: LIFE

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12348
Posted: March 28, 2003 6:30 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 6:30 AM PST
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