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heart 2, 3, 4 (Free verse) by daniella
primped in pink, this beating heart
has bended all out for you.
knowing the way i did it so.
cramped in the corner of your liking
i dedicated high time to flying
through your thoughts and back
to shine for you in your sky,
to land to sail to dive back
from where your ocean waved
toward me. at a distance i could still see
the merry idea that our shadows cast
far better than you and i,
up and down that turquoise plan.
i would think, how i do shine
when i am in his heart and his in mine.
i spun a silken web for me to tangle
you in sheer pleasing sighs and grins.
and wept the day you struggled free.
from where my hand held your palm
and floated there like a bell chime
weaving my web, spinning
my soft knot neatly
coming untied.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9564
Posted: March 21, 2003 7:56 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 7:56 PM PST
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