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Frozen (Free verse) by scornofangels The rain has stopped
and snow is falling.
A world of glass
subdued its calling.
The streets are empty.
The sky is black.
I wish for words
I could take back
My path is frozen
as my heart.
My tears are ice,
they break apart.
I walk forever
beside my grief,
I walk forever
this silent street.
Up the ladder:
PC
Down the ladder:
our little secret
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Posted: March 10, 2003 9:53 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 9:53 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7019925 Overall Rank: 11986 Comments:
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lastobelus @ 217.226.25.123
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10-Mar-03/2:08 PM
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i dunno, maybe you can sell this to Lords of Acid for a buck if you work the word pussy into it somewhere.
give up please
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