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I Love You (Free verse) by babyBOOMER
I Love You ~ My Eyes Are like a Vacuum Visions of Love and Loveliness Swept Away as Though with a Broom I Will Never Compromise My Love Yet Dreaming Takes Me Far Away Of a Woman Lying above ~ Lips and Hair Soft as a Summer Day Skin as Soft as the Petals of Springtime Flowers Compromising Positions Within My Eyes This Inquisition Moving . . .Touching . . .And a Kiss ~ I So Miss Dream on Dreaming Is Harmless Dreams of Droplets Sweat So Fluid and Wet A Fantasy of Phrases ~ Dazzling Before Me We Undress Warm Hands and Cheeks We Caress Overbearing Is the Desire to Move Closer ~ A Singular One This Our Ovation Until the Rising of the Morning Star Dreams of Drifting Afar Again Movement Begins to Transpire Again We Perspire Though Never to Tire ~ Gently We Hold Each Other Kissing from Head to Toe Love So Renewed to Me Surely must Show Pleasure So Lost and Once Forgotten Our Bed Suddenly Turning to a Smooth Lake On a Warm Summer Day ~ I Awaken to Find My Dreams Have Not Drifted Away Nighttime Will Again Come to Me And There I Will Play out My Fantasy Of Soft Round Breasts And Silken Legs That Hold So Tight ~ And the Sweetness and Purity of Lips Kissing Through the Night Again We Will Undress Garments Cast Aside One by One Revealing Our Bodies into the Sun ~ I Love You ~ Thom

Up the ladder: Peacock Fight
Down the ladder: my heart sings a song

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11071
Posted: March 9, 2003 6:32 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2003 6:32 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] LeBlank II @ 198.81.26.167 | 9-Mar-03/9:09 PM | Reply
My eyes are like a vacum? Dirt Devil or Hoover?
[8] mrpresident @ 212.134.22.16 | 2-Oct-03/10:53 AM | Reply
Wow, that has fantastic imagery!
[2] Quarton @ 12.217.221.61 | 3-Jul-04/10:12 AM | Reply
Nothing personal but this is awful. It reads like a
bad soap opera. Sorry:)
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