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It Seemed like Forever Again (Free verse) by Jimbo
March 2, 2003
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It Seemed like Forever Again
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So much we learn as years roll on
Tomorrow was not
. . . Just another day
Nor was it like yesterday
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I nearly held my breath so tight
Failure and success
A point so fine
So much like poetry music and art
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Wanting to try
To not remain speechless
Suddenly realizing days are hard to let go
It?s nice to hold on to lovely things
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Next time next time I thought
Sitting there quietly
Words would not come to me
Swallowing your every word . . . a couple of short hours
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Somehow I imagined
It would be more difficult
For so long thinking it would be in death
The next time you saw me
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I?ve never been a rich man
Silence of stars and sea are what I?ve known
Happiness had come once again
And my head was filled with gold
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There is so much mystery
Within human hearts
The dreams that lie ahead
New friend old friend
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Casual meeting
Had I found such joy again?
Giving and forgiving . . . forgiven
I knew you and you knew me
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Trying to look past you was difficult
My stare was close to misty space
With kindly presence near
It seemed like forever again
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Thom
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.875
Weighted score: 5.235324
Overall Rank: 4193
Posted: March 6, 2003 3:36 PM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2003 3:36 PM PST
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