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Mirrors (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
My life is like a fog that I create for my own danger Not being able to see past my own hedonistic imperative I can't stand mirrors Mirrors show me what eats at the core I can't stand that I don't look happy I look like a lost face in a crowd who could care less I look in love and heartbroken at once I look nuts I look like a madman and maybe I am I can't stand mirrors They only tell the truth when it's permanent

Up the ladder: Gunshy Martyr
Down the ladder: Blue Fuckin' Moon

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6256
Posted: February 24, 2003 5:50 PM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2003 5:50 PM PST
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