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stars of wonder (Free verse) by rompingcat
sometimes when it's cold and clear i look at you in my memory and touch you at all my favorite points drawing constellations in my heart and sometimes when it's cold and clear i sit with you in my memory and trace constellations over you over us with all my heart and when i die for you and when i die to you i will trace my heart and hang it in your sky hoping my stars still fit in your universe

Up the ladder: You are my Star!
Down the ladder: Harness

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8549
Posted: February 18, 2003 12:18 AM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2003 12:22 AM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.174.185 | 18-Feb-03/3:31 PM | Reply
star of wonder, star of night, star with royal beauty bright, westward leading, still proceeding....
[n/a] rompingcat @ 142.173.75.195 > <~> | 3-Mar-03/1:16 AM | Reply
stars have no story of their own - it's all our own ifusions
[n/a] rompingcat @ 142.173.75.195 > rompingcat | 3-Mar-03/1:17 AM | Reply
infusions more likely.
confusion too
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