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regrets (Other) by kthulah where was i when you were swimming
deeply for that perfect pearl
many silken lips pried open
shut again to seek once more
seems that both of us had given
in to that numbskullian game
you ran left and i ran righteous
intersecting panic strikes
lose ourselves in mental circling
wolves with fragile teeth of rue
if we are but glancing briefly
this will keep us safe from lo...
garotted by our own morals
on our deathbeds we shall say
he was busy she was married
unborn happy angels stayed
Up the ladder:
Between Now And Then
Down the ladder:
Two Eagles
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Posted: July 11, 2002 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 7:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.65 Overall Rank: 2116 Comments:
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Redfin @ 66.168.139.251
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13-Jul-02/9:54 PM
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Don't know why but I really like this. It just hits home I guess. Good job
sane? no. changed, yes. i have tried to express this, but i always feel like it comes out trite, so it stays in my notebook, where it belongs. this is masterful. kudos.
I know exactly what this is about and the last stanza says it with pith and venom - how stupid we all can be.
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