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Free verse № 39847

A Gift So True

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Feb 2003 · 1 comment

We have a gift that not many find, We have a lasting love, So true and kind. We found eachother, It had to been fate. We both have loved, And dearly lost. But now it dosent matter, We have been brought to one another. Side by side, hand in hand, Theres no other place I'd rather stand. Looking in your eyes, Gives it all away, being in your arms is where I want to stay. You giving me your heart, Is the biggest gift of all. Now we have this new begining, making a new start.

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[4] Robert K Foster 23-May-03/10:42 AM Reply
you have a sense for words, try a different topic. Not all poetry is love and flowers. push yourself. this is also not haiku.